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5 The Buddha left behind a set of core ideas, recorded in both the Theravada and Mahayana canons, which characterize Buddhist teachings in all regions. What are the key concepts? First is the idea that samsara, the cycle of earthly existence, can be removed through personal cultivation. Second, the idea that the world is ever-changing and impermanent. There is, then, nothing in the world of phenomena that possesses eternal existence; all phenomena are characterized by impermanence and lack of essential nature. Individuals become enmeshed in the cycle of existence through the chain of conditioned arising. Overcoming this cycle, one can experience nirvana, final release from the chain of suffering. The Buddha summarized these teachings in the formulations known as the Four Noble Truths, the Eightfold Path, and the 12-fold Chain of Causation. The Buddha is often compared to a physician, who diagnoses the patient’s ills, finds the source of the illness, prescribes countermeasures, and applies the cure. （157字）

双响炮少加糖

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翻译：佛陀同在小乘佛教和大乘佛教中留下了一套核心思想理论，这两种佛教涵盖了所有地区的佛教教义。那何为它们的核心概念呢？其一为轮回之理念，即众生可因个人教化从而解脱尘世轮回。其二便是关于世事变化无常的思想。那就是说，世间本相中，无一物是永恒存在的；凡世事皆以变化之无常和生命实相之不解为其特质。于瞬息条件之所变，众生困于轮回之中。而为打破轮回之苦，业主需得历经涅槃，最终解脱于苦难之链。佛陀将这些教义总结成条规，著有《四圣谛》、《八正道》与《十二因缘》。佛陀常被奉为医者，他为凡尘中人诊断疾病、查找病源，寻救病治人之良方。

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佛陀留下了一套涵盖各地佛教教义的核心思想，小乘佛教和大乘佛教的教规中都有记录。那关键的概念有哪些呢？其一是轮回的观念，其二，万物皆无常，也因此，现实世界里并没有永恒的存在；一切诸法皆无常而无其本质。人因缘起困于轮回之中。而欲跳脱出轮回，须经历涅槃，最终从苦难中得到解脱。佛陀把这些教义总结为四谛、八正道和十二因缘，他常被比作为凡尘中人诊断病症、寻找病根、开方治病的医者。

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The Buddha left behind a set of core ideas, recorded in both the Theravada and Mahayana canons, which characterize Buddhist teachings in all regions.
1 双响炮少加糖译：佛陀同在小乘佛教和大乘佛教中留下了一套核心思想理论，这两种佛教涵盖了所有地区的佛教教义。
2 式微译：佛陀留下了一套涵盖各地佛教教义的核心思想，小乘佛教和大乘佛教的教规中都有记录。
改为“佛陀留下了一套核心思想，在大乘佛教和小乘佛教的经典中都有记载，是佛陀的教法在所有地区都具有的特征。”
What are the key concepts? First is the idea that samsara, the cycle of earthly existence, can be removed through personal cultivation.
1那何为它们的核心概念呢？其一为轮回之理念，即众生可因个人教化从而解脱尘世轮回。
2 那关键的概念有哪些呢？其一是轮回的观念，
改：这些核心思想是什么呢？首先是轮回的观点，俗世的存在是轮回的，而通过个人修行可以解脱轮回。
Second, the idea that the world is ever-changing and impermanent. There is, then, nothing in the world of phenomena that possesses eternal existence; all phenomena are characterized by impermanence and lack of essential nature.
1 其二便是关于世事变化无常的思想。那就是说，世间本相中，无一物是永恒存在的；凡世事皆以变化之无常和生命实相之不解为其特质。
2 其二，万物皆无常，也因此，现实世界里并没有永恒的存在；一切诸法皆无常而无其本质。
改为：其二，世界一直在变化，并不恒在。所以，在表象的世界中，没有什么拥有永恒的存在；不恒常、无本质是所有的表象都具有的特征。
Individuals become enmeshed in the cycle of existence through the chain of conditioned arising.
1 于瞬息条件之所变，众生困于轮回之中。
2 人因缘起困于轮回之中。（缘起，译得好）
改为：缘起不断如链，众生因此困于轮回之中。
Overcoming this cycle, one can experience nirvana, final release from the chain of suffering.
1 而为打破轮回之苦，业主需得历经涅槃，最终解脱于苦难之链。（好，链字不能丢）
2 而欲跳脱出轮回，须经历涅槃，最终从苦难中得到解脱。
The Buddha summarized these teachings in the formulations known as the Four Noble Truths, the Eightfold Path, and the 12-fold Chain of Causation.
1 佛陀将这些教义总结成条规，著有《四圣谛》、《八正道》与《十二因缘》。（不能用书名号）
2 佛陀把这些教义总结为四谛、八正道和十二因缘，（好）
The Buddha is often compared to a physician, who diagnoses the patient’s ills, finds the source of the illness, prescribes countermeasures, and applies the cure. （157字）
1 佛陀常被奉为医者，他为凡尘中人诊断疾病、查找病源，寻救病治人之良方。（好！）
2 他常被比作为凡尘中人诊断病症、寻找病根、开方治病的医者。（好！）