chapter10-13

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Reader:
Reading Time: 4.14-4.27
Reading Task: Pages 283 - 453

Summary of the Content
This part focuses on sentence - structure issues in Chinglish. It analyzes common errors like the noun plague, where over - reliance on abstract nouns makes sentences complex. For example, redundant, empty, and category nouns can be transformed into verbs, gerunds, adjectives, or adverbs to clarify meaning.Problems with pronouns and antecedents are also covered. A pronoun must agree with its antecedent both grammatically and logically. Mistakes include unclear or ambiguous antecedents, or incorrect number agreement.The placement of phrases and clauses matters. Incorrect placement can lead to misunderstandings. For instance, modifiers should correctly modify the target words, and important information should be placed strategically.Dangling modifiers, where the modifier is grammatically misrelated to the rest of the sentence, are discussed. Solutions involve making the logical subject of the modifier match the sentence subject.Parallel structure requires matching forms for matching concepts, enhancing sentence logic and rhythm. In writing, elements connected by conjunctions or in lists should be parallel.Logical connectives are essential in English writing. They clarify relationships between sentences, but are often missing in Chinglish.
Evaluation
The writing style is practical and easy - to - follow. It uses numerous examples to illustrate problems and solutions, which is very helpful for English majors. The theme is highly relevant as Chinglish is a common issue we face. The ideas are well - organized, guiding us step - by - step through different aspects of sentence - structure correction.
Reflection
As an English major, I often unconsciously write Chinglish. This reading has made me more aware of my writing problems. In daily writing, I'll pay more attention to the correct use of nouns, pronouns, and logical connectives. For example, when I write an essay, I'll double - check if the pronoun has a clear antecedent. Also, I'll make sure my sentences have a proper parallel structure. This knowledge will surely improve my English writing in assignments and exams.