Multi-scocieties

生如夏花

Multi-culture fusion, a term continuously heard about, refers to communication between various cultures which involves with customs, ideology, ways of thinking, and even the way of living. It is also a significant process in the long history of human being, which is filled with harmony and conflicts. Societies are wild stages for it to display. Without multi-cultures, a society would be dragged into the slime of deadness.

Societies, with a multiple culture, will gain more benefits. In the respect of politics, due to the different views, the design of laws and social regulation will tend to be mature, for example, America ,a immigrate country , contains those cultures from all around the world, has a perfect law system. Besides, with ethnic cultures merged, those colorful flowers of art are blossoming brilliantly. In the respect of economic, a market needs a lot of variety. Multi-culture societies supply the unique consumer goods to the world, at the same time; it also contains endless business opportunities inside.
Hoverer, every coin has two sides. Someone hold the opposite opinion against the benefits which the multi-culture societies bring to a country. They indicate that multi-culture societies actually are under a potential ethnic conflict, which will break out some time, and threat the security of a country. And also some individual cultures will be overwhelmed by the tide of mighty ones, and then lost forever.
To sum up, it is usually acknowledged that nothing is totally prefect in the whole world. However we should not focus on the minimal definition of multi-societies to ignore the splendid merits from them. How to carry forward its strong points and limit their weak ones is incredible important for us in the future.

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the title must be "multi-culture societies"

and there are some grammatical and spelling mistakes, i hope you can correct them

your attitude towards multi-culture society is clearly shown since this article is well-structured. But this article, at its best, is only a rough draft of what's under discussion here. As a junior student, you should elaborate on why its advantages outweigh its disadvantages in about 400 words.