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发表于 2008-9-21 17:28:52
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en, it seems reasonable ....
It seems that you will be a responsible teacher, and also, a serious one. *_*
The structure is clear, the language you use is formal. The idea sounds practical. Only the title is inappropriate for it does not clearly suggest the central idea.
[ 本帖最后由 Cinderella 于 2008-9-21 17:34 编辑 ] |
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