pain

Lemony

Pain
    Intelligent people talk about ideas, Common people talk about things, Low people talk about other people.Wise men talk because they have something to say, fools talk because they have to say something.
    Why are there different level of people among us? Except experience, I think, pain plays a decisive role in it.    Pain makes man think. Thought makes man wise. Wisdom makes life endurable.
Life seems like a cycle of ups and downs and the period when they happen in an individual life, shapes his growing up process . We always suffer from the life which does not care about our choices or our preferences in a way.
    In fact, life teaches us not good things or bad things but the meaning of actions and deeds that we do.  When we feel pain, we get more knowledges at the same time. As it goes,” A fall in ditch, a gain in wit”.  What life teache us is beneficial for our mental, social and spiritual growth, then our experience makes us wise.
    Of course, we can change our lives. Though life gives us all the oppurtunities which we deserve, life rests the power of decision-making on us to follow it or not. In some sense, life is like a field of fallen snow, where I choose to walk is up to us. If I hoped a life of ease in furture, I should face pain and learn from pain instead of feeling pain.
    Don’t engage in a personal cover-up of areas that are unpleasing in your life. Don’t consider God that gives you so many tribulations is curel. On the contrary, it’s a handsome present that we are enough luck to gain, especially in our youth. The harder I work, the more luck I seem to have.
   When it’s tough, do it tough. In other words, face reality and be adult in your responses to life’s challenges. Those who dare to fail miserably can achieve greatly. Excellence can be attained if one person can think deeper than others and acquire more konwledge from experience.
    Please believe that pain is an effective medicine which makes us become more and more excellent.

[ 本帖最后由 Lemony 于 2008-12-7 22:04 编辑 ]

Cinderella

I think the reason is that everyone has different experiences and pain.
_______This is the transitional sentence and this is where you lead your readers to your discussion about "pain", so you'd better state in this way:
Except experience, I think, pain plays a decisive role in it.

Cinderella

Excellence can be attained if one person cares more than others think wise, risks more than others think safe,and deams more than others think practical.
____grammatical mistake. Correct it.